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Not entirely happy with my recent edit (10-Sept-05), but still think it's an improvement. 'Rager' is a better word choice over 'party', because it's clearer that it's not an elegant hobknobbing party for the Newport elite, it's a full-on, hardcore, drugs'n'drunkards smashfest, but I'm worried that the full connotations of 'rager' won't be recognized by the average, non-OC watching reader. Also 'somewhat nomadic travelling' seems too clunky to me, but it's the best I could come up with - can anyone improve? --Icthyos