Talk:Hair for Hope

Review on Article

Strengths

Paragraphing: There is a good brief section which guides readers to the topic. Following that, all paragraphs have adequate information which is reader-friendly.

Headings: Proper headings help readers to locate information more easily as they categorize the type of content presented in each paragraph.

Standard appendices: Information from reliable sources were used and appropriate referencing was made. The highly credible sources used include the official website of Hair For Hope as well as relevant news articles from The Straits Times.

Tone: The article is written with an appropriate point of view and the tone is not subjective. Even though the article contains positive and negative aspects of the topic, the tone is neutral and not promotional. This is a strength as it ensures that the article will not be identified as a form of advertisement.

Pictures: Relevant pictures make the article more interesting and also help readers to better understand the events being described.

Suggestions

Content: The five points listed under description can be presented under another heading named as “Goals” for clearer presentation. The points could also be rephrased in the contributor’s own words to prevent infringement of copyright. TYXJLSM (talk) 14:47, 20 April 2015 (UTC)

Assessment 16/1/2018

Rated the article as start and low. Might need some copyediting to prevent copyright violation as mentioned above. Also there are several grammar errors that need to be fixed. Once this is done I can push this up to a C. 1.02 editor (talk) 06:37, 16 January 2018 (UTC)