Made further amendments in response to feedback on rejection of draft

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I've made revisions in response to feedback: added sources from Frieze magazine (the major magazine of contemporary art); Visual AIDS and Tate (major independent institutions); removed less authoritative sources.

To clarify: the existing sources are all independent and authoritative: to newspapers, major cultural institutions, magazines, and websites of art criticism. Trepanationsolution (talk) 07:41, 26 September 2024 (UTC)Reply