Talk:Hans Karl von Winterfeldt/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 05:58, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:58, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- He negotiated the Convention of Westminster and received the Order of the Black Eagle and the Order Pour le Mérite; did he receive the honours for the negotiations? Please make it clear fixed
- Please check the "Allegiance" parameter in infobox. The country's name is missing. fixed
- I am sure you're well aware that "Service/branch" is for "Army, navy or the air force" Frederick moved him around as needed
- General of Infantry; any link or modern equivalent done
- No need of references in the infobox, because they reflect the prose ok
- Section 1;
- lord of several estates; by birth? not clear, removed
- His education was imperfect; any specific reason? none given
- Section 2;
- Major-General; remove hyphen and also link done
- modern equivalent for "cornet", I think it is sub-lieutenant it is in the British Army, but in the German armies, the ranks are different. I could link to Fahnrich, but that isn't right either.
- Link grand-duchess, maid-of-honor, Count and major done
- Frederick William is over linked done
- More later ... Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:18, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
- Section 2.1;
- battle of Mollwitz; initial capitals done
- defeated the Austrians (17 May 1741) -> defeated the Austrians on 17 May 1741 done
- One month from this day -> A month later done
- second war; mention in full done
- promoted him (1745) major-general, to date from January 1743 -> was promoted to major general in 1745, with effect from January 1743 done
- Section 3;
- Development of military intelligence program; I think the title isn't apt, because nothing much about the program is mentioned. Better name it "Later years" it's really 7 years war....I've reworked it
- put quotes on the saying of the king, perhaps {{quote}} would be the best option I couldn't get it to work right, simplified (took out the German)
- any reason for transfer of the grave? none given probably Frederick William IV wanted to create grand monuments.
- What are the copyright statuses of the designs of the memorials? GDFL etc free use posted by users
- Do any of the references have ISBNs? 2 do, added
- 0% confidence, violation unlikely.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 11:22, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:40, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: