Talk:Hard Times (Paramore song)

Latest comment: 7 years ago by MarioSoulTruthFan in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 12:49, 25 June 2017 (UTC)Reply


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Overall GA review

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  • This article is nowhere near GA material.
  • It's missing a commercial performance section same can be said about a credits and personnel section.
  • No external links for the lyrics of the song, for example.
  • References are not well formatted. Example: Pitchfork, NPR has no work, missing dates of publication in most sources, as well as, authors missing.
  • The NYT source has valuable information (meaning of the lyrics) that is not used.
  • The lead is nowhere near what's requested.
  • Live performances are not mentioned here.

@Kokoro20: It seems to me that you put no effort in making this article shining, to be honest. We have two options, either you will work hard over the next seven days to make this shine or I'm going to have to fail this, what is it gonna be? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:06, 26 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

I'll tell you something Mario, I've been keeping an eye on this article and Kokoro hasn't been very active recently; his edits have mostly been vandalism reverts and keeping the watchlist safe. I also compared this to my only song GA and thought this article was awfully short. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 00:52, 27 June 2017 (UTC)Reply
I haven't been very active lately, because I haven't been in much of a Wikipedia mood, and I've been busy elsewhere. But I'll try and see what I can do with the article within that week. If not, then go ahead and fail this, and I may try again later. Kokoro20 (talk) 10:44, 27 June 2017 (UTC)Reply
Alright, noticed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:26, 27 June 2017 (UTC)Reply