Talk:Harold Agnew/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Seattle in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 13:30, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
- I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 13:30, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
- No DAB links, no dead links. The source url for the badge images, the infobox image, and the "30 years of service" image is not specific enough.
- They've just been taken down at the original site. Fortunately, we archived them on Commons. Added link to archive site.
- Ref 26 needs an ndash. Ref 1 needs a page range ndash.
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- The PDF file references could use a "|format=PDF" parameter.
- Why? They have the PDF icon. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Can you justify the reliability of the "Nuclear Diner" reference?
- It's just about where his ashes are. The site is a blog, run by three women who have worked at LASL. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- "Cockcroft-Walton" needs an ndash.
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- "From 1961 to 1964" watch caps
- Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Nothing on his death in the lead?
- It's right there in the first sentence.
- A sentence on his death would be beneficial to summarize the "later life" section and give closure to the lead. Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- A sentence on his death would be beneficial to summarize the "later life" section and give closure to the lead. Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- It's right there in the first sentence.
- "He witnessing the" past here
- Correct. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Can you link "telemetering" somewhere, or explain what it is?
- Yes, there is an article on it. Linked. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- "Fellow postgraduate student" plural here
- Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- I would like to hear more on when he served as a Senator for New Mexico. Certainly there's more on what he supported and his actions in the Senate.
- So would I. Got a source? Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Have you looked for sources? Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Yes. That's where I got the rest of the article from. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- I could not find much, but I added what little I had. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:30, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
- Yes. That's where I got the rest of the article from. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Have you looked for sources? Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- So would I. Got a source? Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Can you link "Eastern bloc" somewhere?
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- Wall Street Journal needs italics
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
- "illegal means.". double period.
- Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
Other than the Senator issue, most concerns are minor and fixable. I will re-look when these issues are responded to. Seattle (talk) 13:52, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
- Meets GA criteria after a re-look. Passing. Seattle (talk) 15:42, 29 October 2013 (UTC)