Talk:Harry Styles/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 10:02, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 10:02, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

 

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Final

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

• Paragraph 3 in 2010–2015: The X Factor and One Direction has too much content about the activities of One Direction and not enough about the contributions of Styles to the group. Paragraph needs improvement.

Rewritten the section to make it more concise. The nominator should still add more content about Harry's activities during that time. They can simply expand the last line which talks about him writing a song for Ariana. ArturSik (talk) 10:55, 9 March 2021 (UTC) Y

• 2016–2018: Harry Styles and Dunkirk: Edit this (first) paragraph for clarity and drop this sentence: Jeff Bhasker executive produced the album, and Alex Salibian, Tyler Johnson, and Kid Harpoon served as producers. The focus is on Styles.

Done. ArturSik (talk) 19:05, 8 March 2021 (UTC)Y

• Public Image: Paragraph commencing Styles wore skinny jeans (goes backwards in coverage of sartorial style and changes) should be moved up above para 2.

Y Trillfendi (talk) 20:32, 8 March 2021 (UTC)

• Reference 105 (to Rolling Stone) is a dead link.

User: Brown Chocolate corrected that. Trillfendi (talk) 20:32, 8 March 2021 (UTC) Y

• Good work with archival references.

*  GA on hold pending corrections.       --Whiteguru (talk) 06:18, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

Thank you to all the contributors here for the corrections to the article. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:40, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

 Passed