Talk:Haslemere/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:01, 25 December 2021 (UTC)

I'll get to this after Boxing Day. ♦ jaguar 18:01, 25 December 2021 (UTC)

• I couldn't help but note the lead neglects to mention Grayswood. Is there anything to mention about it? Otherwise it summarises the article perfectly
• "85 ha (210 acres) of which is classified as Ancient Woodland" - I'm not sure if ancient woodland is capitalised, though I might be wrong
• "To the east of Haslemere town and Graywsood" - town is redundant here
• "a group of workmen was drinking in the Kings Arms pub" - were
• "In 2021, the GP surgery serving the town is at Haslemere Health Centre, in Church Lane" - how about As of 2021?
• "In 2021, the hospital functions as a community hospital" - this will be redundant as time goes on. Try Presently, the hospital...
• It's best to write out First/Second World War fully in the 'War memorials' subsection (as opposed to WWI/WWII)

After reading through the article I can't find anything to hold it back, so an outright pass is bestowed. It is comprehensive, reads well, and the sources are all in good order. I enjoyed reading it - I had no idea Hindhead was in Haslemere parish. I congratulate you on all the good work you've done with these Surrey towns - a FAC could be a possibility... ♦ jaguar 20:25, 29 December 2021 (UTC)

Awesome!! Thanks @Jaguar: for your very thorough review. I wish you the very best for your new job and hope you'll be able to find time to contribute to Wikipedia when you are off duty! Thanks also to @SovalValtos:, @Murgatroyd49: and @Tony Holkham: for their support and feedback. Happy New Year to All!!! Mertbiol (talk) 21:08, 30 December 2021 (UTC)