Talk:Hasta Que Me Olvides/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:23, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will complete this today, happy new year! --K. Peake 10:23, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• The recording date is not sourced for the second infobox and why is Juan Luis Guerra not wikilinked?
• Write out the composers and producers in the body
• "handling the track's production." → "handling the production."
• Swap the release and ballad sentences
• ""Hasta Que Me Olvides" was released as" → "It was released as"
• "who listed it among his" → "who listed it among Miguel's" and shouldn't there be a comma before who?
• Remove redundant capitalisation for Latin AWard and add the year 1995

Background and composition

• "led to Guerra composing" → "led to him composing" on the img text
• The 1940s part is not sourced
• Pipe certified gold to Music recording certification
• Remove El Siglo de Torreón Mexican newspaper introduction
• Wikilink as cover versions instead
• Shouldn't you mention the title of the album in the second para?
• "in Mexico, led to Guerra" → "in Mexico led to him"

Promotion and reception

• Mention it was the album's second single per this being a new section
• Remove the comma before El Concierto
• Mention it was released as a promo single that same year
• "La Prensa de San Antonio Diana Raquel commended" → "La Prensa de San Antonio author Diana Raquel commended"
• End the speech marks at YouTube Music
• "becoming his ninth number one" → "becoming Miguel's ninth number one"

Personnel

• Pipe percussion to Percussion instrument
• Wikilink as Paul Jackson Jr.
• Remove pipe on mixing assistant

Charts

• Good

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks solid at 33.8%!!!
• Wikilink El Siglo de Torreón on ref 3
• Wikilink Greenwood Publishing Group on ref 4
• Wikilink San Antonio Express-News on ref 5
• Pipe WEA Spain to Warner Music Latina on ref 14
• Wikilink ProQuest on ref 16
• Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 18
• Pipe Hearst Corporation to Hearst Communications on ref 19
• Pipe Univision Communications to TelevisaUnivision on ref 20
• Pipe Sony Music España to Sony Music on ref 23
• Wikilink Prometheus Global Media on ref 27

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 20:35, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake Happy New Year to you to Kyle! I'm confused on what you mean by "Write out the composers and producers in the body". WEA Spain is not part of WEA Latina, I just linked to Warner Music Group instead. I removed the publishers instead of linking them as I've been told they're not needed if the work parameter is already listed. Erick (talk) 22:37, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

  Magiciandude As a rule of thumb, everything written in the lead has to also be mentioned directly in the body, so write out who composed the song in the first section. --K. Peake 09:29, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake I think I did it. I also just finished up on Suave if you want to review that as well. Erick (talk) 16:28, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, this looks fabulous and I will assess my schedule to see if I have time to review that article! --K. Peake 09:02, 3 January 2023 (UTC)