Talk:Heart Wants What It Wants/GA1

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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:26, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:26, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Lead

1. "It was penned" - is that correct? Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
2. I think it's better to mention New Zealand instead of Croatian chart and same for section "Reception". Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and composition

1. Duration of song not mentioned. Eurohunter (talk) 11:20, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• Eurohunter done. Iaof2017 (talk) 15:06, 2 September 2023 (UTC)

Reception

1. I don't think that two words "original creation" and the "best preview" needs quotation - you meantion that "characterised the song as an". Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

Music video

1. "It begins with a close-up shot of a rotating CD" - how is that CD? It's clearly vinyl. That's what happen if you describe music video without using sources. Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

Track listing

1. Add Template:Track listing and release dates. Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

• Well, including Template:Track listing is optional, or is it more essential than it seems? Iaof2017 (talk) 13:37, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

Other

1. Remixes and its release not mentioned in the text. Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

• I added that part in the "Background" section. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:37, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

1. There is no introduction to previous "I'm Good (Blue)" and next single "Call On Me". Eurohunter (talk) 21:12, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

• Aren't the links in the infobox enough? Iaof2017 (talk) 13:37, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

• @Iaof2017: Infobox is just a summary of article, so all the information which are there should be in the text first. Eurohunter (talk) 16:36, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

• Eurohunter done. Iaof2017 (talk) 16:26, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

1. There is a problem with reference 3 and 31 and not all references has link to archived version. Eurohunter (talk) 21:51, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• Couldn't find any problem. Iaof2017 (talk) 15:12, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
  • @Iaof2017: Not all references has link to archived version - reference 27 as example. Eurohunter (talk) 17:52, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

1. @Iaof2017: There is error in reference 3 and 31. Eurohunter (talk) 19:43, 17 August 2023 (UTC)

• Couldn't find any problem. Iaof2017 (talk) 15:12, 2 September 2023 (UTC)

• @Iaof2017: References been fixed by GreenC bot. Eurohunter (talk) 17:52, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

1. Reference 2 - it's Warner Music Australia. Eurohunter (talk) 19:43, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
2. Reference 10 - there is no link to Rolling Stone and possible same situation in other references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:44, 17 August 2023 (UTC)

• Every publication or website was linked in the first instance. Iaof2017 (talk) 15:14, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
  • @Iaof2017: References "are counted" independently, so every reference should have it own links. Eurohunter (talk) 17:52, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

1. Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:44, 17 August 2023 (UTC)

• Where? Iaof2017 (talk) 15:12, 2 September 2023 (UTC)

• @Iaof2017: All the references. Eurohunter (talk) 17:52, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

Summary

• Hey @Eurohunter: thank you for the review. I will start addressing the issues within the forthcoming 24 hours, as I am currently on vacation. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:29, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

• Eurohunter, I have fixed the issues now. If you encounter any further problems, please let me know. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:37, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

• Eurohunter fixed. Iaof2017 (talk) 15:15, 2 September 2023 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter @Iaof2017 this has been stalled for 2 months now. Eurohunter, it looks like the ball is in your court, can you please wrap this up quickly? RoySmith (talk) 15:43, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Every major problem was fixed. Iaof2017 (talk) 22:32, 18 November 2023 (UTC)