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Glitch alert: the link for Robert Bauer, the actor, leads to Robert Bauer, former White House Counsel under President Obama. Somehow I really don't think it's likely. Could somebody look into it? 67.172.247.155 (talk) 20:19, 21 July 2011 (UTC)Reply
"Rob Bowman thought that the episode worked well, and he included an overhead shot on the engineering set which had not been done before on the show." This just seems kind of strange. What is the connection between the two clauses? (There is more detail in the production section...perhaps mention how he played around with the direction of the ending.)
"Kunivas' condition worsens, and Korris, Konmel, and Worf are present when he dies, and let out a fierce roar as per Klingon custom." Perhaps clarify that it is the latter three characters that roar (as Kunivas is still the subject of the sentence).
I've copyedited it to change it to "Kunivas' condition worsens, and Korris, Konmel, and Worf are present when he dies, and the three let out a fierce roar as per Klingon custom." Miyagawa (talk) 23:17, 20 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
" Re-runs were shown of "The Battle" and "Hide and Q" over the next two weeks, and when "The Arsenal of Freedom" was shown three weeks later, the ratings had decreased to 10.4 million." I'm not sure this is relevant. The next sentence seems to get the point across.
" DeCandido is a novellist and has produced works based in the Star Trek universe, who describes himself as "the Klingon guy" as far as Star Trek novellists are concerned." Since the "who" doesn't come after the subject, change it to "and".