Talk:Helena Iren Michaelsen
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Steven Buehler in topic Neutrality
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Neutrality
editTone of voice is not neutral.
"But shortly after the demo was released, she left Sahara Dust due to the guys not allowing her to express her own musical ideas and opinion over the stuff they gave her to sing and they wouldn't let her compose her own songs."
being a prime example of this.
85.159.97.4 (talk) 09:16, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
Appears to have been written by a non-native English speaker. I took the liberty of largely rewriting it in a more objective style. Advise if this is sufficient to remove the neutrality notice.