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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
Suggestion I recommend adding Bert Joseph (1917) and other book sources to a section called "works cited", "Notes" etc. (you choose) and prehaps use Template:Sfn (or Template:Sfnm) and add page number(s) the content is cited on.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
Considering how much this article relys on, WP:SCHOLARSHIP, this might be something we will need to resolve. I notice that they add a reference list at the bottom which is good but I'm noy sure about including
Suggestion Instead use "website=Newspapers.com" use "via=Newspapers.com" and add the correct publisher to "publisher=" and the location the newspaper published in "location=".
fortwaynebeer.com/berghoff-brewing is not a reliable source.
When citing Encyclopedia Britanica it's better to use {{cite encyclopedia}} prehaps currently it can be omitted?
What page is content cited in Bert Joseph (1917)? This appears to be a 719 page book, so pages are needed for someone who has the book itself and would like to verify the information.
I am unable do verify the status of File:Indiana Governor Winfield T. Durbin.gif, File:William J Hosey.png, File:Kaiser Wilhelm II of Germany - 1902.jpg.
