Talk:Henry Sutton (instrument maker)
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Veyibanbaylor in topic grammar
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grammar
editThis sentence is oddly worded: "His place of work and the range of his stock can be determined from the following advertisement..." Anyone have suggestions for improvement? Wondering WHO determined this? I'm a fan of the subject-verb-object simple sentence format. --Veyibanbaylor (talk) 14:33, 18 July 2016 (UTC)