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Translation issues
editTirkfl 09:15, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
- Zeugenberg ⇔ leave untranslated?
Tirkfl 12:52, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
- Langstreifengewannflur ⇔ longishly streaked farmland??
- should this be Ridge and furrow? JMiall₰ 12:12, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
- Not really, I read the article, and as I understand, it refers to the hills that occur by ploughing. But I followed some links and now I think that "open fields" or "strip cultivation" would fit well. -- Tirkfltalk 07:26, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
- Dreifelderwirtschaft ⇔ three-field crop rotation According to leo.org. Tirkfl 08:12, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
- Flurzwang ⇔ I don't know I left this untranslated after I found a few English articles using the word as an loan word. Tirkfl 08:09, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
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