Talk:Hiroyuki Suzuki (yo-yo player)
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Gordon410 in topic Lead section revision
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Lead section revision
editInstead of "performer in yo-yo", it should read "yo-yo performer" - as in one who does yo-yo performances. It is more succinct. What are Eli hops? This is not common knowledge and should be explained. Gordon410 (talk) 19:14, 20 July 2016 (UTC)