Talk:History of Cuban nationality

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Will Hanley
  • In the Colonial period section, you jump around quite a bit. Sort out chronology, and be clear about what sort of rights or activity you are discussing: some is about economy, some is about authority, some is about civic and legal administration.
  • Format references as footnotes.
  • The section on slaves is good, in that it describes some particular practices of rights-bearing nationals. More context is needed, though.
  • Explain why end of Spanish rule was important for Cuban nationals, and tell what it meant (in practical terms) for some to maintain Spanish citizenship.
  • More hyperlinks within the text, offering further information on key terms, places, events, and ideas, would be useful.

Will Hanley (talk) 16:33, 23 November 2007 (UTC)Reply