Talk:History of Jhelum
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Intro
editThe sentence "It has since its creation changed hands from the local tribes and dynasties to the Persian, Greek, Hindu, Buddhist, Muslim, Sikh and British rule to present-day Pakistan." makes no sense. For starters, each of these entities is linked to the noun "rule" - i.e "Persian rule", "Greek rule", "Bhuddist rule". "Change hands" in historical context usually means through war etc - when did the 'Bhuddists' attack and conquer? Second, each entity was wikilinked, BUT to a generic page - Persians to Iran, British rule to UK - these tell me nothing of the historical context. Rui ''Gabriel'' Correia (talk) 12:24, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
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What was the ancient name of river Jhelum
editWhat was the ancient name of the river Jhelum 2409:4055:49B:C790:7EA9:C5D8:3BF4:6E34 (talk) 09:17, 17 May 2022 (UTC)