Talk:HolbyBlue/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

General

• The en dash must be replaced with an ordinary hyphen for words such as "newly−proposed" and "most−watched" for example.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• "HolbyBlue (also known as Holby Blue) is a British police procedural drama series, which aired from 2007 to 2008 on BBC One – on Tuesday nights in 2007 and Thursday nights in 2008." - The latter part of this sentence should be removed from the lead.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 10:24, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96: quick question (just want to make sure I get rid of the right bit first time), is it everything in bold you would like removed? ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:02, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

@ElectrodeandtheAnode: Yes, should have made that point more clearer. MWright96 (talk) 10:21, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

• Remove the duplicate wikilinks of Zöe Lucker, Kacey Ainsworth and Jimmy Akingbola in the bottom paragraph.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:08, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
• "Times critic David Chater" - Change this to David Chater from the same newspaper. Also do the same in the critical reception sub-section.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:08, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

Plot

• "Kate is then hired as a receptionist at the police station," - employed  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:12, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
• "Kate hands in her resignation, but John manages to convince Kate to remain at the police station." - Kate tenders her resignation, but John manages to convince her to remain at the police station  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:12, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
• "John and Luke rescue Kate and the children, but are shot in the process. They both survive." - John and Luke rescue Kate and the children; athough they are shot in the process, they both survive.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:12, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
• "learns of Lucy's boyfriend's criminal reputation and forces the pair to break up." - separate  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:12, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
• "It later transpires that John's father was jailed for abusing prostitutes." -imprisoned  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:12, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

Ratings

• "Despite a decreased 23% audience share," - Despite a 23% decrease in audience share,  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:16, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
• "viewership had declined 4.10 million and a 21% audience share," - viewership had declined to 4.10 million and a 21% audience share  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:16, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

Accolades

• "During its lifespan, HolbyBlue was nominated for six awards, of which it won zero." - reword to HolbyBlue was nominated for six awards during its lifespan, of which it failed to win any.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:18, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
  • To add: "HolbyBlue" should be in italics as it is the name of the show. Soaper1234 - talk 21:00, 27 October 2017 (UTC)  Done - thank you for pointing that out Soaper1234, I completely forgot to italicise the word. ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 23:14, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

References

• All of The Times references lead to the homepage of The Times Literary Supplement rather than the designated article. Please find an archive link for them.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 11:40, 28 October 2017 (UTC)
• Do the same for the two The Stage citations that have not been archived.  Done ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 20:47, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

Going to put this review on hold until the reviewer has addressed the issues put forward. MWright96 (talk) 18:28, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

All issues addressed

@MWright96: I believe have addressed all the issues put forward. ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 11:41, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

@ElectrodeandtheAnode: Yes you have. Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:21, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

Fantastic! Thank you very much for taking the time to review the article. ElectrodeandtheAnode (talk) 12:31, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

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