Talk:Hollywood (Jay-Z song)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Sauloviegas in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk) 15:04, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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  • Add format.

Lead

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  • "American R&B singer" -> American recording artist
  • "Following the release of '30 Something (song)'" -> 30 Something
  • "Which she re-titled" -> Which was re-titled

Song information

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  • Change title to 'Background and composition'

Critical reception

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  • Sample must be on Background and composition.

Chart performance

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  • Remove image. Doesn't add anything to the article on this section.
It is a free image, so it is fine. Adabow (talk · contribs) 16:57, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Track listing

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  • Remove 'small' tag from radio edit/album version/instrumental
Why? This is the standard format.
  • Add tracks lenghts.
They are unavailable, sorry. Adabow (talk · contribs) 16:57, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
No problem. - Sauloviegas (talk) 19:45, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Charts

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That is NOT a requirement, but only ONE format. Adabow (talk · contribs) 16:57, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Ok... - Sauloviegas (talk) 19:45, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Fix those things, and you'll be ok... I think this article is very thin on information, but a good article is not about quantity, and yes about quality...

Everything is addressed. By the way a good article must be broad in its coverage. Adabow (talk · contribs) 16:57, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Congratulations, the article has passed. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 19:45, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply