Talk:Home (Star Trek: Enterprise)/GA1
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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 18:47, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
It seems I'm making a habit of reviewing Enterprise articles. -- Zanimum (talk) 18:47, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
Passing infobox, Plot, lead. Having never watched past season 2 (the series was taken off broadcast television in Canada, I believe, and only shown on Space) I can still follow the references to past plotpoints.
Production
- "how do they readjust": are you sure there's no hyphen in re-adjust?
- Yep - fixed. Miyagawa (talk) 19:33, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
- "It was directed by Allan Kroeker": Are we talking solely about "Home" being directed by him, or was "Innocence" also his? By starting with "It", my mind automatically refers back to the previous sentence about the Fire Plains and Voyager.
- I've redrafted that line to distance the mention of "Home" as far away as possible as the mention of it in the previous sentence. Miyagawa (talk) 19:33, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
Reception and home media release
- "a general plot - the latter": you need an en dash or em dash.
- I've run the dash tool and fixed it. Miyagawa (talk) 19:33, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
- You've used [19] four times in a row, within the context of reception. I think readers will get that it's all from the IGN Filmforce, just based on your prose, no need to repeat, but I'm not picky either way.
- I've dropped one which wasn't needed - but left two in as they're citing quotes. Miyagawa (talk) 19:33, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
Passing References, but I'll note that Checklinks always gets caught up by trekweb.com links, declaring them "Heuristics resolved as likely dead". They've obviously got something screwy with their server or software.
Passing "External links", and the two free licensed images. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:16, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
- Great, thanks for reviewing as always. I'd recommend you pick up season 3 and 4 on Netflix or something, as they're a complete step up from the first two seasons. Especially season four... if only they'd started with that season... Miyagawa (talk) 19:33, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
- Sadly, I don't have Netflix. I tried signing out one of the seasons at the library, around the first time you did an Enterprise review. After I checked it out, I noticed it was missing a disc. #hardcopymediumproblems (Passing, by the way.) -- Zanimum (talk) 21:44, 23 October 2014 (UTC)