Talk:Homer's Night Out/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Mattisse in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Hi, I will be reviewing your article, Homer's Night Out. It looks very good. There is a typo that I'll just fix myself. I will be posting further comments here.Please feel free to contact me. —Mattisse (Talk) 20:48, 15 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

  • "Bart wanders into the room" - this is another room than the restaurant, I take it, a party room of some sort? This part is a little vague for someone unfamiliar with the episode.
  • Since you describe the costumes of the "showgirls" under Production (and have a still of a costume), it would be better if you described their presence in the plot more clearly.
Otherwise, the article seems to fulfill the criteria for GA. I will give a full review when you respond. —Mattisse (Talk) 21:10, 15 September 2008 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! I have made some edits now, let me know what you think! =) TheLeftorium 06:33, 16 September 2008 (UTC)Reply
Fineal GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
I am pleased to pass this article for GA. —Mattisse (Talk) 15:42, 16 September 2008 (UTC)Reply
Awesome, thanks! BTW, I noticed that in the ratings paragraph the date says "19-25 March March 1990", shouldn't it be "19-25 March 1990"? TheLeftorium 15:47, 16 September 2008 (UTC)Reply
Yes. Sometimes the script screws up. I check it visually but don't always catch everything. It needs to be corrected. —Mattisse (Talk) 16:02, 16 September 2008 (UTC)Reply