Talk:Honda VFR750F

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Redherring22 in topic Lead Section and Citation

March 2008

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Regarding the last edit by 82.36.96.9, while it is correct that the picture is of a VFR750P, the page is called VFR750F, so (whilst we have what is actually an inappropriate picture) I settled for clarifying in the photo caption (visible when the cursor is hovered over the pic) that the photo was actually of the police model, VFR750P... JZH (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2008 (UTC)Reply

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This article needs significant expansion of the ill-starred 1984 VF750F. For example:

  • Mayershon, Norman (August 1984), "New Superbikes: Today's Technology Destined for Tomorrow's Cars", Popular Mechanics, vol. 161, no. 8, Hearst Magazines, pp. 82–85, ISSN 0032-4558, retrieved 2010-06-04
  • American Motorcyclist, vol. 51, no. 7, Westerville, Ohio: American Motorcyclist Association, p. 79, July 1997, ISSN 0277-9358 http://books.google.com/books?id=KPYDAAAAMBAJ&pg=PA79, retrieved 2010-06-04 {{citation}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)

--Dbratland (talk) 20:24, 4 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

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UK English edit notice

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Please create an edit notice for the article, placing in it the template {{British English|form=editnotice}} Thank you--Dennis Bratland (talk) 17:26, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

@Dennis Bratland: have there been editorial issues going on, I'm not seeing a need for this - and in fact parts of the article appear to use US spelling. — xaosflux Talk 20:51, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
It looks like the first non-vandalism edit was [23], establishing UK spelling per WP:RETAIN. I've tried to make it consistent now, though it needs a rewrite. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 22:07, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
  Not done @Dennis Bratland: in general WP:ENGVAR already says to leave pages in the style they are already in, if this page ends up having a recurring issue with engvar violations we can through that notice up. — xaosflux Talk 23:14, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

Centre stand claim re. RC36-2

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Bennett's says with respect to the 1994–1997 — VFR750FR/S/T/V (RC36-2) that is was the first VFR750 model with a centre stand.

That's not correct. According to Churchill, Jeremy; Coombs, Mark (1998). Honda VFR750 & 700 V-Fours '86 to '97 Service and Repair Manual. Vol. 2101. Sparkford, Somerset, BA22 7JJ, UK: Haynes. p. 6.4. ISBN 1 85960 365 3.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: location (link)

'The centerstand is attached to the frame as follows:

  • On J and K models ...
  • On R models onward ...
  • On all other models, refer to step B above ...'

As far as I can tell, all the road-going VFR750s have centre stands. The J model came out in 1988. I've got a VFR750FG (1986 model year) in my garage and it's certainly sat on a centre stand provided as original equipment by Honda.

Formatting/Language Style

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Hi guys! Just noticed that some of the language used throughout this article is a little informal. In addition, some of the sentences are incomplete or don't make proper sense. I have gone through and tweaked a few!

Lead Section and Citation

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Hi there! I made a few grammatical corrections to the lead section to try and improve the overall tone and writing style. I also added an already-used source to another sentence that needed a citation. --Redherring22 (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 06:05, 23 March 2022 (UTC)Reply