Talk:Honor-related violence in Sweden

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Cameron Dewe in topic Lead section clean-up


Lead section clean-up

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I have tagged the lead section as having information that is not given elsewhere in the article. The lead section should also be shorter and less repetitive. For an article with less than 15,000 characters the lead should have only one or two paragraphs, not three paragraphs. The lead section is meant to be a succinct summary of a topic, not merely an introduction. It should highlight what makes the topic notable. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 10:21, 5 July 2022 (UTC)Reply