Talk:Hormizd III/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Gog the Mild in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 17:20, 6 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • I have made a couple of minor copy edits.
  • Daryaee is not used as a source. Should he be under 'See also'?
  • "who is called unfair". I have no idea what this means. Would it be possible to rephrase?
  • "this is most likely a legend, and is disproved by other sources" If it is "disproved" then it is definitely a legend. You need to reword here. (Maybe "disproved" -> 'contradicted'?)

Gog the Mild (talk) 17:20, 6 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Changed unfair -> unjust. I've also added Daryaee as a source and changed disproved -> contradicted. --HistoryofIran (talk) 17:34, 6 May 2019 (UTC)Reply
That all looks good to me. A fine little article. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:54, 6 May 2019 (UTC)Reply
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