Talk:Hose's broadbill/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Jens Lallensack in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 21:39, 6 August 2022 (UTC)Reply


  • and a lack of black markings on the head – "and lack black markings"?
    • Corrected.
  • due to its a moderately rapid decline – "a" too much?
    • Removed "its" instead since I think it reads better that way.
  • is in honour of the British zoologist Charles Hose. – You know why? Did he collect the holotype specimen?
    • Yes, added this info in the lead and body.
  • The species can be differentiated from other Calyptomena by its blue underparts. – Do they also live in Borneo? Maybe worth mentioning earlier?
    • Yes, added.
  • It has been recorded eating soft, greyish-yellow berries – this seems somewhat nebulous. Maybe name at least the group of plants this refers to?
    • Source doesn't mention it. Presumably they were seen eating berries of this description during a survey or such, and the those conducting the survey weren't able to identify the plant and so instead provided a description.