Talk:Hospitalité Notre Dame de Lourdes
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Secretlondon in topic tone
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editMost wiki articles:
- do not start with a heading
- start with "<bold noun> is" or "The <bold noun> is"
- define the article's subject in the first para, with starting dates, etc.
tone
editThe tone of this is wrong - it reads like promotional material. Secretlondon (talk) 09:38, 21 April 2018 (UTC)