Talk:Hospitalité Notre Dame de Lourdes

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Secretlondon in topic tone


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Most wiki articles:

  • do not start with a heading
  • start with "<bold noun> is" or "The <bold noun> is"
  • define the article's subject in the first para, with starting dates, etc.

Ian Cairns 19:04, 27 November 2006 (UTC)Reply

Done. Ian Cairns 19:13, 27 November 2006 (UTC)Reply

tone

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The tone of this is wrong - it reads like promotional material. Secretlondon (talk) 09:38, 21 April 2018 (UTC)Reply