Talk:Hotchkiss School/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:13, 27 May 2015 (UTC)

I'll have this to you soon JAGUAR  19:13, 27 May 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• The lead is a great concern, for one citations should not be in the lead unless it's citing controversial information and secondly there are far too many links
• The lead does not summarise the article per WP:LEAD and the second paragraph composes of a list with no prose
• "and among the Classes of 2011-2014" - why is classes capitalised?
• The table in the Athletics section should not be in a GA article
• The prose in the sub-sections of the Extracurriculars section is too short
• " 827 acres (3 km2)" - wouldn't acres be converted to hectares?
• The Notable alumni and In popular culture sections are the major concerns here, there is no prose and the sections only consists of lists, which go against the GA criteria

References

• No dead links but formats are not consistent

Close - not listed

I am sorry to do this but there are too many problems to be addressed here before this can meet the GA criteria. The article is mostly list-y and the lead does not summarise the article either. The table in the Athletics section goes against guidelines and other than that this can't be promoted right now JAGUAR  12:31, 28 May 2015 (UTC)