Talk:How About a Friendly Shrink?/GA1

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Reviewer: Theleftorium 12:57, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Nice work on the article Hunter! Here's my suggestions:

• "How About a Friendly Shrink?" received generally positive mixed reviews – Wouldn't "received mixed to positive reviews" sound better?
• lowest rating for an individual Desperate Housewives in series history – "the series' history"? (appears in the Reception section too)
• which he won't let Lynette read – "he will not let"
• what she's sure is – "she is"
• he can't reach – "he cannot"
• Gabrielle initially suspects her daughter Juanita + Susan is pleased that her son M.J. – will avoid confusion to people not familiar with the show (like myself)
• Angie takes an instant dislike to her son Danny's – same as above
• who is in the Leopards, are among the slow group – shouldn't this say "is among"?
• seems to understand what he's been through – "he has"
• the person she's become – "she has"
• Link Wisteria Lane
• The episode marked the return of
• when her character suffered a nervous breakdown – you can't say "when her character" because Katherine Mayfair is a character
• Reeves is the third former –> Leeves
• Link "rating" and "share" to Nielsen_ratings#Ratings/share_and_total_viewers
• Link You Gotta Get a Gimmick
• praised the episode, and said she was – no need for a comma here
• Try to avoid repetition of the word "said" in the second and third paragraphs of the reception section
• Can you move the quotation box to the left? The image above gets in the way.

Good luck! :) Theleftorium 12:57, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks Leftorium! I think I responded to everything. (It should have been "mixed reviews", not "positive mixed".) Let me know if there's anything else! — Hunter Kahn 14:05, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
  • Nice work! I'll pass the article. Theleftorium 14:11, 1 April 2010 (UTC)