Talk:Hugh of Fauquembergues/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y (0.0% is highest.)
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No Dead links  Y
  • Images appropriately licensed  Y

Prose Suggestions

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Lede

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  • Baldwin I of Jerusalem granted him Galilee after its first prince, Tancred, who was Baldwin's opponent, suggest Baldwin I of Jerusalem granted him Galilee after its first prince, Tancred, who was a rival of Baldwin,
  • against Toghtekin, Atabeg of Damascus. suggest against Toghtekin, the Atabeg of Damascus.

Early life

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  • but their conflict was soon resolved. suggest but their conflict was soon made unnecesary.

Prince of Galilee

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