Talk:Hulda Marshall

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LPascal in topic Hulda Marshall edits by me

Hulda Marshall edits by me

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@Lois Grierson This a good start page for Hulda Marshall. Well done. I have been editing the HM article mainly to give it a more neutral tone and so it is stating facts reported by others, rather than making statements that have no referencing or no way to check (eg they didn't have children because they were so involved in the art world). It may help if you read the Wikipedia policy on a neutral point of view and write the rest of the article with that in mind so other Wikipedia editors don't challenge this article. WP:NPOV. Another improvement would be to link your references to the Trove newspaper article so readers can easily check your reference using the sources. You can do that through putting the url of the Trove newspaper article into the Reference/Cite website box when you do the references. You might then have to go into edit reference later and fix up any automated mistakes like article or newspaper title. In summary though, the article is well written and adds to our store of knowledge of Australian women artists. Keep at it. LPascal (talk) 06:02, 25 March 2023 (UTC)Reply