Talk:Humboldt High School (Iowa)

More Specific Advice

• There are far too many irrelevant wikilinks on the page (You don't need to link "$", "Student", or "librarian"). The biography on my user page is great example of what not to do.
• There are really only three references here and they're not particularly useful (The schools is, by the nature of the beast, biased).
• Single sentence paragraphs need to be expanded or collapsed into larger sections
• There is a lot of information here that No One outside of the school community cares about.
  • Most of, if not all of the activities section should be removed (Possibly just keep the text sections under athletics and cocurricular headings)
  • The last play of the last game two years ago is not of global interest
  • Cell phone policy could be summed up in a sentence and is not essential to the school
• Pictures make a good addition to any article
• Much of the information (Like faculty/coaches) could be condensed into tables rather than trailers on the ends of sentences
• More information needs to be added about the school, not just the student activities
  • How was the school founded (etc..)

I can point out where references are needed if that will help. Let me know if you need more to work on. Adam McCormick 02:58, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

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