Talk:Hurricane Alma (1970)

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Juliancolton in topic GA Review
Good articleHurricane Alma (1970) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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April 6, 2010Good article nomineeListed
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can anyone tell me why those letters appear throughout my article? i see em in the edit window, but not in the regular article view. --Viennaiswaiting (talk) 00:19, 19 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

The ampersand nbsp semicolons are required between numbers and their corresponding noun per the wikipedia Manual of Style. Thegreatdr (talk) 16:18, 21 February 2010 (UTC)Reply
ooh, ok thx Viennaiswaiting (talk) 16:33, 21 February 2010 (UTC)Reply
Wait, are you talking about this article? Its not your article, I was the one that created it. --12george1 (talk) 02:18, 22 February 2010 (UTC)Reply
Whilst both of you have worked on this article, its neither of yours articles per WP:OWN.Jason Rees (talk) 02:32, 22 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Hurricane Alma (1970)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
  • That day, it rapidly deepened under weather patterns conducive to development, including low tropospheric shear, strong upper-level outflow, and apparent eastward inflow. - This seems too technical for the casual reader (and even for me).
  • Avoid using "remained" twice in the same sentence. Any other way of wording that?
  • After moving offshore Virginia - "off the coast"?
  • The flooding forced the evacuation of 3,000 people in Oriente Province. - The lead says 2,000 people evacuated.
  • One girl died from lightning in Miami - A direct strike? I'd like a bit more clarification on this bit of info.

On-hold for now. You know the drill! –Juliancolton | Talk 15:42, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Got all of it, except for the lightning strike. That was from the NHC, who said 1 girl died from lightning in Miami, and that was it. I couldn't find anything in the newspapers about it, because there was a lot of severe weather elsewhere in the country. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:44, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Sounds good; passing. –Juliancolton | Talk 18:54, 6 April 2010 (UTC)Reply