Talk:Hurricane Anna (1961)/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 02:44, 4 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • "at least 18 homes were destroyed, 228 were damaged, and an additional 18 were left uninhabitable" - if they're uninhabitable, aren't they destroyed?
  • Any more Belize damage? You say damage was reported, but don't go into detail.
  • "imagery showed a cloud mass near 10°N, 39°W." - where is this? Ditto with later lat/long readings
  • "Early on July 20, ship reports indicated a developing circulation between Grenada and Trinidad.[3] Early on July 20, squalls on the former island produced wind gusts as strong as 50 mph (80 km/h)" - feel like these could be merged.
  • "The United States Weather Bureau issued tropical cyclone watches and warnings for Venezuela, Curaçao, Bonaire and Aruba.' - not backed up by ref 6
  • Link "Belize Harbor" to Belize City, as that's where the port is.
  • "In Belize Harbor, many ships and boats were moved upstream inland and Belize's Church Welfare Service began to ship clothing and other materials in anticipation of the aftermath of the hurricane. - what does the first clause have to do with the second part?

All in all, a decent (short) article. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:44, 4 December 2013 (UTC)Reply