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"Conditions favored further intensification, and it is estimated the depression strengthened into Tropical Storm Bertha early on July 28, based on a nearby ship report." suggest re-wording to "Conditions favored further intensification, and based on ship reports, it is estimated the depression strengthened into Tropical Storm Bertha early on July 28." YEPacificHurricane16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
"he Canadian Hurricane Centre (then called the Maritimes Weather Center) and National Hurricane Center began to issue warnings for Nova Scotia and most of Atlantic Canada on July 31 and August 1.[4][5] " change "Canadian Hurricane Centre" to "Maritimes Weather Center" and remove the parenthesis. YEPacificHurricane16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)Reply