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![]() | On 17 April 2023, it was proposed that this article be moved to Hurricane Emily. The result of the discussion was not moved. |
Todo
editShorter intro, more structure (subsections). Jdorje 03:01, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
- Corpus Christi, TX report - If not done so, this should be included. Hurricanehink (talk) 01:01, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
"Just nine days before"
editThe intro (and numerous other places) say that Emily broke dennis's nine-day-old record for July intensity. But such a claim of precision is very dubious. Dennis reached 150 mph/938 mbar on July 8 at 1200 UTC breaking Audrey's record (145 mph/946 mbar) then. However, it reached peak strength 140 mph/929 mbar on July 10 at 1200 UTC in the Gulf. Thus Dennis broke Audrey's record on the 8th and then broke its own record on the 10th. Emily broke Dennis's record reaching 155/929 on the 16th (pending TCR). I changed the wording in the intro to "just six days before" but it might be safer to be a little more fuzzy with "less than two weeks earlier". — jdorje (talk) 18:19, 2 March 2006 (UTC)
Damages
editDoes anyone have a source for the correct estimate? It looks like the number in the infobox was taken from the estimate for Mexico alone. I was hoping the TCR would clear this up, but it hasn't. ETA: I changed the casualty figures to agree with what was in the TCR. Feel free to add a citation, although I didn't feel the need to since we are not doing this for all storms. Good kitty 22:40, 13 March 2006 (UTC)
- I know that Mexico was around $400M and Grenada was $110M. Since there was some damage elsewhere as well (Texas, Jamaica, several other islands of the Windwards), I think the actual number is in the $550-600M range. CrazyC83 23:39, 13 March 2006 (UTC)
- At one point, back when the article was very incomplete, the infobox listed something like $600 million but the main article only listed a small fraction of that (adding mexico and grenada together), so I changed the infobox. Of course we should attempt to find the best possible estimates for each area and then just add them together to get the total - having a table here might be of some use. — jdorje (talk) 03:26, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
I believe the Texas damage estimates cited are both contradictory and dubious. The article states that there was "no significant structural damage," but then immediately afterward states that "several homes were destroyed." Are destroyed homes not significant structural damage? Building damages in Texas are subsequentlky estimated at $125,000. Again, if "several" homes were actually destroyed, the damages would almost certainly be well in excess of $125,000, even in the poor Rio Grande Valley area of south Texas. Finally, the $178 million figure for south Texas crop losses is surely overstated. Such massive losses would have devestated agriculture in the Rio Grande Valley. Original sources may have provided these figures and information; but they are inaccurate nonetheless. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.163.90.86 (talk) 01:29, 26 May 2011 (UTC)
Redirect
editSince the name wasn't retired, should we abolish the redirect? I am not sure about this, so others should have their say. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 19:08, 6 April 2006 (UTC)
- What do you mean? There will need to be major work done, to change all the Hurricane Emily links to Hurricane Emily (2005), because of this surprise (the biggest surprise since Gordon in 1994). Until that is all done, we should keep the main article as the redirect here. CrazyC83 02:42, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
- I think it is fine either way. I also think it would be fine with 2005's Emily having the main name. — jdorje (talk) 04:35, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
- Luckily I had a day off work and needed something to do... so I changed as many Hurricane Emily links as I could find (not on people's talk pages, just main articles) to Hurricane Emily (2005). Just go to the Hurricane Emily redirect page and click "What links here" in the toolbox on the side. That's how I found the links that needed changing. PenguinCDF 14:02, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
As I see it we have two choices.
- Redirect Hurricane Emily to the disambiguation page, or simply move the disambiguation there.
- Keep the 2005 storm under Hurricane Emily, since it is undoubtedly the most notable Hurricane Emily to date and therefore by wikiproject practices may get the main article name. Hurricane Emily (2005) would of course remain as a redirect.
The current method of redirecting Hurricane Emily to this article is bad. If we're going to do that we should just give this article the main name. However I do realize there's a lot of links to be fixed before we change the redirect. — jdorje (talk) 02:21, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- See Wikipedia:WikiProject_Tropical_cyclones#Tropical_cyclone_article_naming. This may naturally need some revision after the current discussion as it's never been challenged before. — jdorje (talk) 02:40, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- I'd support keeping this article at the main name, unless/until? another Cat 5 Emily comes along. NSLE (T+C) at 04:55 UTC (2006-04-08)
- At least altering the links is straightforward enough see Special:Whatlinkshere/Hurricane Emily (2005). Whether this storm gets Emily or Emily (2005), all the links (at least those in articles) should point to the article. Nilfanion 10:53, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
Considering Emily won't be used for another 6 years, I think it should be at Hurricane Emily, without the year. Hurricanehink 13:08, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- Since the 1987 and 1993 Emilies also have articles, the main article should be the disambiguation page once all redirecting is complete. CrazyC83 22:13, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- Agreed. The main article should be the disambiguation page, and the articles should all carry years. SchuminWeb (Talk) 02:23, 8 June 2006 (UTC)
The only links to Emily which redirect from the main page to (2005) are in userspace, WP pages or talk pages - none from articles. If Emily is moved back to the main page, redirects through (2005) arent harmful are they? Nilfanion 22:28, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
Grenada Damage
editIs the damage estimate for Grenada for the insured damage, or is total damages? Let me know soon okay.--Lionheart Omega 15:57, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
GA on hold
editThe storm history section is nicely written, but I'm concerned with the patchiness of the impact section. By my count there are four paragraphs that contain only one sentence, and another two paragraphs that contain only two. It gives the impression that you're trying to stretch a limited amount of information further than it can confortably be stretched. Can you edit this section so that it flows a bit more naturally, and perhaps add a few more details? MLilburne 11:45, 2 November 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks; it looks a lot better. I have made a couple of small changes myself and will pass the article. MLilburne 17:44, 2 November 2006 (UTC)
GA Sweeps Review: Pass
editAs part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Meteorology and atmospheric sciences" articles. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. I have made several minor corrections throughout the article. Altogether the article is well-written and is still in great shape after its passing in 2006. Continue to improve the article making sure all new information is properly sourced and neutral. It would also be beneficial to go through the article and update all of the access dates of the inline citations and fix any dead links. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have updated the article history to reflect this review. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 03:09, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
Animated image
editThis warrants inclusion: http://www.ncdc.noaa.gov/img/climate/research/2005/jul/emily-satellite.gif Plasticup T/C 03:04, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
Fatalities and Damage totals
editThis section is for the cumulative fatalities and damages which will be listed by country.
- Overall
- 17 deaths (14 direct, 3 indirect), 1 missing
- $1.014 billion (round to $1 billion)
- Grenada
- Jamaica
- 5 direct deaths ("Freak" accident that killed a mother, her two children and two police officers trying to rescue them; all were swept off a 70ft cliff)
- J$5.98 billion (for Dennis and Emily; minus $32 million for Dennis stated in TCR gives $65 million)
- Haiti
- 5 direct deaths, 1 missing (All 5 drowned)
- Honduras
- 1 direct death (Drowned)
- Mexico
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- 5 deaths (2 direct, 3 indirect)
- 8.871 billion pesos ($834.3 million)
- Quintana Roo
- 1.11 billion pesos ($104.3 million)
- 3 indirect deaths (2 from helicopter crash, 1 from electrocution)
- Yucatan
- 1.02 billion pesos ($95.9 million)
- Nuevo Leon
- 726.5 million pesos ($68.3 million)
- 1 direct death (Drowned)
- Tamaulipas
- 1.53 billion pesos ($143.9 million)
- 1 direct death (Drowned)
- PEMEX (oil)
- 4.484 billion pesos ($424.7 million)
- United States
- $125,000 in structural damage [1] [2]
- $4.7 million in crop losses
Requested move 25 February 2017
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The result of the move request was: not moved; request withdrawn. (non-admin closure) Laurdecl talk 02:20, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
Hurricane Emily (2005) → Hurricane Emily – Obviously the most notorious Emily of all, was earliest C5 on record in the Atlantic and caused $1 billion in damages. More then enough to qualify as having the main title. MarioProtIV (talk/contribs) 19:55, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose - This Emily was the most notable single use of the name for reasons you mentioned, but I'm not convinced it's the WP:PRIMARYTOPIC. Per that policy, "A topic is primary for a term, with respect to usage, if it is highly likely—much more likely than any other topic, and more likely than all the other topics combined—to be the topic sought when a reader searches for that term." (emphasis mine) Several of the other storms named Emily had severe impacts on land. Emily 87 is frequently cited as the most destructive TC in Bermuda's history, Emily 93 caused significant damage in NC's Outer Banks, and Emily 11 was one of the wettest systems ever recorded in Hispaniola. Page views are not conclusive; while Emily 05 does have a consistent edge, it still receives fewer than 100 hits per day, such that it's not a vastly more likely target than all of the other storms combined. The difference isn't large enough to negate the inherent flaws of using page views as a determining factor for primary topics. I believe that with so many damaging storms named Emily, the disambiguation is appropriate. – Juliancolton | Talk 21:34, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose - Completely agreed with what Julian said. I'd like to add that Emily is on the list this year. Therefore it's more appropriate to have the disambiguation. Hurricanehink mobile (talk) 22:01, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
Fine, I withdraw the request per your reasons. --MarioProtIV (talk/contribs) 22:21, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
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Significance
editMore needs to be reported on Emily's significance and the changes that she brought to South Texas. Damage was not as high as in the past, but she brought changes that linger to this day and have become a part of family lore for hundreds of thousands of Texans. No one will ever forget Emily, but we may forgive, as time goes by. Meanwhile, the next generations should be made aware of the storm's incredible impact and significance on our daily lives, even today. 169.252.4.21 (talk) 08:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)HWatcher
Dude, I think you are the only person in Texas who will "never forget" Emily, it was not a particularly bad storm, and it is not a part of "family lore" for hundreds of thousands of people in Texas. Come on! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 169.252.4.21 (talk) 13:25, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
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GA Reassessment
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- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
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- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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- Pass/Fail: ✗ Fail
This article clearly fails GA. The coverage this article has is less than impressive. There are other problems as well. If you act like a duck and quack like a duck, you are a duck. ~ Destroyeraa🌀🇺🇸 01:34, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
- I'm not going to do all of this, though I will try to help around with this. Stay safe, Cyclone Toby 04:02, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Lead is too short. Should be two paragraphs.
Met
editOverall damage was fairly minor to moderate as the island were still repairing from a much more destructive and powerful storm such as Ivan, 10 months ago.
Does not belong here.The storm weakened slightly as it continued westward, and remained a Category 4 while passing south of Jamaica and, on July 17, the Cayman Islands. Emily continued on its nearly straight track to the west-northwest, weakening somewhat but remaining at Category 4 until striking Cozumel just before mainland landfall at Playa del Carmen at 06:30 UTC on July 18. Sustained winds were 135 mph (215 km/h), and the eyewall passed directly over Cozumel.
Unsourced.- MH uses the TCR too much. There is an advisory archive fyi.
I am completely rewriting the MH in my sandbox, using more sources and making it larger. Stay safe, Cyclone Toby 12:25, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
Preparations
edit- No US preps
Impact
edit- For a Category 4 hurricane, impact seems limited in Mexico.
- Haiti impacts? It caused 5 deaths there.
Some sources
edit- Meteo journals/papers
- Intense Convection Observed by NASA ER-2 in Hurricane Emily (2005)
- Diagnosis of the Initial and Forecast Errors in the Numerical Simulation of the Rapid Intensification of Hurricane Emily (2005)
- The Impact of the Amazon–Orinoco River Plume on Enthalpy Flux and Air–Sea Interaction within Caribbean Sea Tropical Cyclones
- Sensitivity of Numerical Simulation of Early Rapid Intensification of Hurricane Emily (2005) to Cloud Microphysical and Planetary Boundary Layer Parameterizations
- Conditions Influencing Hurricane Emily's (2005) Precipitation Patterns, Convection and Upper Tropospheric Outflow
- Effects of the Madden Julian Oscillation on the Cyclogenesis of Hurricane Fausto (2002) and Hurricane Emily (2005)
- Impact of MODIS and AIRS total precipitable water on modifying the vertical shear and Hurricane Emily simulations
- A comparison of the tropical disturbances that spawned Hurricanes Dennis, Emily, Katrina
- Resumen del Hurácan "Emily" del Océano Atlántico (in Spanish)
- Other Journals
- Effects of Hurricanes Emily and Wilma on coral reefs in Cozumel, Mexico (paid access only)
- The landslide disasters induced by the precipitation with Hurricane Emily in July 2005 at the cities of San Pedro and Monterrey along the mountain range of Sierra Madre Oriental, Nuevo Leon, Mexico (in Japanese)
- Spider Monkeys (Ateles geoffroyi yucatenensis) Cope with the Negative Consequences of Hurricanes Through Changes in Diet, Activity Budget, and Fission–Fusion Dynamics (paid access only)
- Damage and recovery of forest structure and composition after two subsequent hurricanes in the Yucatan Peninsula (paid access only)
- Grenada
- Mexico
Requested move 17 April 2023
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The result of the move request was: not moved. No evidence that this article is the primary topic. (closed by non-admin page mover) – MaterialWorks (contribs) 19:03, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
Hurricane Emily (2005) → Hurricane Emily – The name was Good without a (2005) 119.94.56.230 (talk) 09:02, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
- Comment, there are several other Hurricane Emily's. Can you provide evidence that this is the primary topic? Esolo5002 (talk) 12:05, 17 April 2023 (UTC)