Talk:Hurricane Otis (2005)/GA2
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Lord Roem in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Lord Roem (talk) 02:07, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
Comments
editLead
- Not sure on the convention on this, but note the year in the lead??
- Wikilink tropical storm
- Done indirectly, by linking tropical cyclone to "hurricane" ("tropical storm" would be linked to the same page).
- Expand the lead to at least two paragraphs. See WP:LEAD.
- Not needed. The article is relatively brief, so it can be summarized adequately in the one paragraph that is there right now. If there's any specific facts or details you'd like to see added, let me know, but otherwise I don't see the need to add text for the sake of adding text. Juliancolton (talk) 21:04, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
History
- "By late on September 28..." should be "By late September 28...."
Preparations and mpx
- I think you can omit the two specific ships which reported high winds.
- This is a valid observation, so I'd prefer to leave it in. Juliancolton (talk) 21:04, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
Other
- Links to several redirect/disambugation pages:
- Agua Blanca
- Comondu (redirect page)
- Miraflores
Concluding Thoughts
- Good writing. Certainly viable for promotion. Regards, Lord Roem (talk) 02:13, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I've left a few comments above, but otherwise I've addressed most of your concerns. Juliancolton (talk) 21:04, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
- Great! Moving to promote now! Lord Roem (talk) 20:11, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I've left a few comments above, but otherwise I've addressed most of your concerns. Juliancolton (talk) 21:04, 4 March 2011 (UTC)