Talk:Hurricane Sergio (2018)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:16, 7 March 2019 (UTC)

Hello, Hurricane Noah. I will be reviewing this article. I think this might be the first time I've reviewed one of your nominations.

• I don't really see any problems in the lead section. The first paragraph is rather long and detailed IMO, but I can let that slide.
• "On September 26 at 12:00 UTC," - Wikilink UTC to Coordinated Universal Time

  Fixed Noah^Talk 21:58, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

• "located in a band approximately 110 nautical miles east of the center." - I don't remember where exactly the discussion took place, but this project agreed not to use nautical miles

  Gave the converted values. 125 miles and 205 km. Noah^Talk 21:58, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

• In the third paragraph of the Meteorological history, I find it rather odd to start two consecutive sentences with "Twelve hours later...". Actually I would suggest changing the first one to something like "Late on October 5, Sergio began another period of intensification...", as you didn't mention a date in the last three sentences of the previous paragraph

  Corrected. Noah^Talk 21:58, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

• "Sergio made landfall near Los Castros, Baja California Sur as a tropical storm" - Comma after the state name

  Fixed. Noah^Talk 21:58, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

• "Sergio made landfall near Guaymas, Sonora as a tropical depression." - Ditto

  Same as above. Noah^Talk 21:58, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

• Now, for the Preparations and impact section. The NCDC has more info about impact from the remnants of Sergio. For example, this contains more specific damage statistics about impact in Llano County, Texas
• In the references, the names should be formatted consistently. I'm seeing mostly last name first, but there are some with the first name first

  Should be fixed. I found 4 refs that were incorrect. Noah^Talk 22:17, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

All in all, not a bad article. Just make sure you finish these in a timely manner.--12george1 (talk) 03:16, 7 March 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I will complete these over the weekend. I will be gone all day tomorrow. Noah^Talk 23:47, 7 March 2019 (UTC)

@12george1: Everything should be fixed. Noah^Talk 14:34, 10 March 2019 (UTC)