Talk:Hussein, Crown Prince of Jordan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (13.8% is highest) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

• According to Hussein, he is a 42nd-generation direct descendant of Muhammad as he belongs to the Hashemite family, who have ruled Jordan since 1921. suggest you change this Hussein is a 42nd-generation direct descendant of Muhammad, as he belongs to the Hashemite family, who have ruled Jordan since 1921. (I believe the descent is widely accepted fact)

Early life and Education

• Hussein says he is the 42nd direct descendant of Muhammad through his daughter suggest Hussein is the 42nd direct descendant of Muhammad through his daughter
• are the second-oldest-ruling dynasty in the world after the Imperial House of Japan. suggest and are the second-oldest ruling dynasty in the world, after the Imperial House of Japan.
• @Makeandtoss: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:35, 9 March 2018 (UTC)