Talk:INo Mobile

Peer Review

Strengths

The lead section is understandable and succinct, giving a brief yet well-explained description on what INo Mobile is on. The structure is clear as well with the appropriate headings and subheadings. Article is well-substantiated with references for most of the points given. Links given were all valid.

Suggestions

An info box can be added to give others a summary of INo Mobile at a glance, and the info box can include information such as the founder, initial release, type and along with the website of INo Mobile in it. The logo of INo Mobile can also be realigned to the top right corner of the article or to be included at the top of the info box if an info box is present.

Section 3.3 and 3.4 of wearable and lifestyle may be unnecessary as a subheading if additional information is not available yet. Mentioning it in passing should be sufficient.

Please be careful of the lines '... is the perfect way to ensure the safety of your loved ones at all times' and 'easy-to-use mobile phone' as they may contain elements of advertisement. Perhaps, the word 'perfect' can be removed or replaced with a more neutral word.

Even though linked keywords are evident in the article, more can be added for keywords such as 'Research and Development' and 'system integration'. This is so as to allow visitors who do not understand the terms to be redirected.

Reference point number 17 is linked to a Facebook page. The page http://pevoli.sg/project-sac can be used instead so as to improve credibility of the article. Wchen020 (talk) 05:46, 15 April 2015 (UTC)

Intro

Intro / lead is terrible, horrible English grammar & usage. Just FYI Sadsaque (talk) 14:19, 30 November 2016 (UTC)

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