Talk:I Am Furious (Yellow)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 20:27, 21 June 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• First sentence needs apostrophe after The Simpsons
• "All of which are actually rip-off versions of Danger Dog". I think this is an imcomplete sentence. Maybe tie in to previous sentence?
• " Then Stan Lee came inside Comic Book Guy's store and like him, also tells him his work is bad but tells him keep trying." Tense issue (I added bolded to help); also badly written, so try rewording it :)
• You should mention Homer's lumps earlier (like the end of the second paragraph or beginning of the third, in the plot section)
• "staff member's experience" -> members'
• "would originally be animated using " -> would -> were originally going to be animated...
• Make sure Stan Lee quotes end with citations
• Wikilink Al Jean and the Hulk in production section
• Were you able to find any ratings on total viewers? Always difficult to find for these, I know
• Make sure quotes in reception section end with citations
• Ref 7 needs publisher

As always, great production section. I wish Fringe episodes had as many audio commentaries! :) Just make the easy fixes above, and I'll be happy to pass this one for GA. Nice work, Ruby2010 comment! 20:56, 21 June 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Yeah it's pretty neat that the Simspons crew record commentaries for all episodes (even though some of them tend to derail). I think I've fixed all the concerns. Thanks for the review! :D Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:13, 22 June 2011 (UTC)

Article looks fantastic. Great work! Pass for GA. Ruby2010 comment! 06:36, 23 June 2011 (UTC)