Talk:I Am the Walrus (American Dad!)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)

Hello, I shall be reviewing the article sometime later. -- Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for taking a while, but I will start the review now. This is how the article fares against the GA criteria;

1. Well written: Mostly fine, see notes below
2. Factually accurate and verifiable: Fails at present, see notes below
3. Broadness in coverage: Passed
4. Neutral: Passed
5. Stable: Passed
6. Images: The one image is fine, right tags used, Passed

Comments

• Nine of the references are from the Internet Movie Database. I'm sorry, but in my experience, the IMDb is user-generated, hence not a reliable source. I recommend changing the sources to something more reliable.
  • Also replaced the IMDb references with a ref to the episode itself, which contains opening and closing credits. 89119e (talk) 21:04, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
• And YouTube, how is this reliable?
  • I chipped in and removed the YouTube sentence and its associated link. 89119e (talk) 20:51, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
• In the recption section, I don't like the format of the reviews; all three started with "Reviewer-X from X-site gave the episode a positive review." Try to use a little more variety, like "Reviewer-X from X-site reacted positively.
  • Addressed. 89119e (talk) 05:56, 8 April 2011 (UTC)

I will place the article on hold for seven days. Good luck. -- Matthew RD 14:17, 6 April 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for addressing the comments. I will now pass the article. Well done. Let's hope there would be more American Dad! articles to reach GA. -- Matthew RD 00:48, 9 April 2011 (UTC)