Talk:I går såg jag ditt barn, min Fröja

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Review: January 25, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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Latest comment: 2 years ago6 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:I går såg jag ditt barn, min Fröja/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Will do soon. AryKun (talk) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

"best-known and best-loved songs" → This seems like an exceptional claim and isn't mentioned in the body.
- Reworded.
"based on a real event" → This is also not mentioned in the body.
- Added.
Link epistle.
- One of Fredman's Epistles, already linked.
  - I meant a general link to what an epistle is.
"Swedish song tradition" → Maybe just write "Swedish ballad tradition", as ballad and song aren't exact synonyms.
- Done.
"influence in Swedish music" → "influence on Swedish music"?
Link epistle.
- See above.
Link pastorales.
- Done.
"post-baroque" → Shouldn't Baroque be capitalized? Also link.
- Done.
Link burlesque.
- Done.
Link timbres.
- The link is something else; I've added a gloss.
"Gamla stan" → Since this is a proper noun, is the italicization necessary?
- Removed.
Is "(song starts at 23:00)" needed in the external link, since it's a recording?
- It'll certainly help readers as the place in the concert isn't at all obvious.
All the references seem reliable and are properly formatted, although as they are all books/in Swedish, I can not verify them. AryKun (talk) 09:31, 25 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
- Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Just a sorta note: The article about the lady Ulla was based on states that she was arrested for wearing silk, so that might need to be checked out. AryKun (talk) 10:38, 25 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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