Talk:Ian Feuer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 18:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

• "Griffiths took the decision" should that be made the decision? - Done
• "building a football equivalent" AmEng, I guess, so soccer, not football, unless you're talking about pigskins here ;) - Done
• The one year playing ban, any secondary source for this? Any idea what body could impose such a nationwide restriction? Not that I can find I'm afraid. The source states the decision was given by the head of "Las Vegas Soccer" but being unfamiliar with regional US football I'm not sure who that is. I don't think its unreasonable to assume that a nationwide ban could be given, how enforceable it could have been outside of Las Vegas I'm unsure but there are similar occurrences from around the globe. HERE is a similar, although much more extreme, youth football case from France.
• What's sourcing the height in the infobox? - Added
• "was not being paid by the club" Source? - Ref 5 is the source and is in the following sentence but I can ref that claim specifically if its a concern
• WHen did he join the Salsa? Lead says 1994, body and infobox say 1993. - Fixed, lead was wrong.
• " joined London based club West Ham United for" 70,000 pounds? LA Times says "undisclosed fee" in the source given , not sure where that came from, fixed
• Sourcing for the first four rows of the career statistics table? (The Belgian years). - He signed a professional contract after one year but never made an appearance for the club (both mentioned in sources) so I included the empty seasons.

I'll evaluate the actual sources later when I get back home. Courcelles (talk) 19:12, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

• Refs 41, 28, and 21 all look questionable to me.
• Link Non-league football somewhere for us Yanks. - Done

Courcelles (talk) 19:19, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

• @Kosack:. Courcelles (talk) 16:04, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, made a start on these fixes. Kosack (talk) 12:25, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: I think I've addressed all of the points above. In regards to the three references you were unsure of, rdfc is an archive of content that was posted on the official Rushden & Diamonds website before the club folded and the website went down. I've replaced the West Ham and Peterborough sites with a more reliable sources. Kosack (talk) 12:20, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Good to know! I'll give it another look after my coffee is drunk and kicks in. Courcelles (talk) 12:56, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

• Can we get a non-SPS for "Feuer performed the non-speaking role of the Predator in the 2007 film Aliens vs. Predator: Requiem.[39]"? Don't think I've got anything else left to complain about . Courcelles (talk) 15:03, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: Would his Rotten Tomatoes profile suffice? Kosack (talk) 15:49, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

That'd work! Courcelles (talk) 15:50, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Cool, I've added it in. Kosack (talk) 15:53, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 16:07, 1 May 2018 (UTC)