Talk:Independiente (Ricardo Arjona album)

Review

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I'm going to review this album to leave comments. This is not for GAN, but it should help out regardless.

Lead

• References are not required in the lead as they are sourced in the body in the article.
  •  Done
• Some information you listed in the lead are not mentioned in the body of the article such as the album reaching #1.
  •  Done
• In general, the lead for this article does not adequately summarize the article well. I suggest you read WP:LEAD on how to write a lead section for an article.
  •  Done

Body article

• Some key information for an album article are missing. For example, the commercial reception for album. How well did it do on the charts? How much it sell?
  • That information is not available. i've made and extensive research over the internet and all i've found is already on the article. =( --Hahc21 (talk) 00:51, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
  • I've re-structured the article. Now it contains such info.  Done
• You mention a tour in the lead, but it should be summarize in the article as its own section.
  • I'll be adding the tour section then...
  •  Done
• The music sample isn't working for me. I can help out if you're having trouble. Also, the sample exceeds the limit to how long it may be. Only 10% of the total song length may be used, in this case, no more than 24 seconds per WP:SAMPLE and it is more than 30 seconds.
  • Please help me! I knew that sample was over the limit... --Hahc21 (talk) 00:51, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
• See Wikipedia:WikiProject Albums/Album article style guide for more information on how an article for an album should be written. Erick (talk) 21:37, 7 May 2012 (UTC)

Nomination

I withdrew the nomination. 2 reasons:

1. Ricardo Arjona is still promoting the album, so new information will arise.
2. A major structure is needed. Thanks for reviewing the article and writing what needed to be done. =)

The article has improved quite significantly with your major edits. Nice job! I will get the sample fixed as soon as possible. EDIT: I see you got the samples fixed already, good job! I really like the picture you added on the tour section. I would still recommend the article getting peer reivewed as it will point you to the right direction and the article will have a better chance of getting GA. Erick (talk) 02:58, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

Thanks dude! I'll be requesting the peer review immediately. I owe you one XD --Hahc21 (talk) 17:20, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

I think the article is in good shape and TRM pretty much nailed everything in his peer review. The PR can be closed and it should be good to go for GA. Erick (talk) 17:05, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Independiente (Ricardo Arjona album)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 19:50, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

• 1 dab link
• 6 dead links

• This version included an album-only video at No.15 called "Independiente" --> This version includes an album-only video entitled "Independiente"
• No --> number
• On Canada and Spain --> In Canada and Spain... make sure this type of thing is fixed throughout the article.
• Following, the tracklist of 'Independiente': --> Not needed
• iTunes Bonus Track --> iTunes Store bonus track
• Consistency between (Billboard) and US Billboard in charts section.
• Sample of "Fuiste Tu Ricardo Arjona" needs to be reduced per sample guidelines.

Ok. I fixed all. Cheers! —Hahc21 20:19, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

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Translation problems

The original quotation on the Spanish page is «Dentro de la palabra "Independiente", incluso cuando suena a extrema libertad, hay una gran cantidad de compromiso y la responsabilidad de ser capaz de administrar, de la mejor manera posible, toda esa independencia.» The English for "compromiso" is "commitment", not "compromise". Please correct this (I do not edit because someone will revert automatically). It may be a good idea to check the quality of other translations on this page, since this is a pretty elementary error. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.13.205.244 (talk) 03:56, 15 August 2014 (UTC)