Talk:International Day of Zero Tolerance for Female Genital Mutilation
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Bad Link
editReference 1, http://www.unfpa.org/news/news.cfm?ID=927 , tested 6 February 2013, goes to a database error.Whiteguru (talk) 04:22, 6 February 2013 (UTC)
Found what appears to be a valid link to the cited source at http://www.unfpa.org/public/news/pid/4830 ; will attempt to correct.MsPorterAtFHS(talk)MsPorterAtFHS 16:06, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
concerns being high risk
editThis sentence "with the concerns begetting FGM being so high-risk, the abolition of such practices must be prompt" is a bit confusing. Does it mean "with the concerns that the practices of FGM are very high-risk, the abolition etc " ? The word "begetting" is unclear and the subject of "being" and antecedent of "such" is "concerns" grammatically. --Richardson mcphillips (talk) 18:23, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
types of health risks
editI Googled "Health risks Types I, II and III" and the only direct hit was from the UN page this is taken from. Are these technical terms? If so, it would be good to link to the Wiki article that explains them. If not, they should be explained. As the paragraph stands now, they aren't even mentioned after the headline. --Richardson mcphillips (talk) 18:29, 5 February 2017 (UTC)