Talk:Interstitial pregnancy

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Ekem in topic Too much jargon

Too much jargon

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Examples:

  • "namely that portion of the tube that transverses..."
  • "located in a horn of..."
  • "The interstitial part of the Fallopian tube represents its most proximal segment, and is described as tortuous with a length of... "
  • "Medially is the os (ostium) of the tube connecting it to the endometrial cavity and laterally the tube continues in its isthmic segment."
  • "The area is well supplied by a vascular arch..."
  • "Interstitial pregnancies maybe confused with angular pregnancies that are located in the endometrial corner close to the uterotubal junction..."

This sounds like terminology from a medical text as is not written for the general reader or lay person. Regards, —mattisse (Talk) 16:58, 4 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

I tried to remediate without sacrificing precision.Ekem (talk) 19:12, 4 February 2010 (UTC)Reply