Talk:Introduction and Allegro (Elgar)

Heavy edit or a rewrite is needed

This article is in serious need of a re-write. The English is often strange and nonsensical and littered with superfluous verbiage. The impression is second-rate. Just read it to see. P0mbal (talk) 23:28, 31 July 2013 (UTC)

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