Talk:Invivo Wines
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Jonathanischoice in topic article has heavy bias
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Wikipedia is not a sales brochure
editWP:NOTBROCHURE - there's an awful lot of irrelevant codswallop in this article. Jon (talk) 11:07, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- I've trimmed the sales pitch down, and replaced self-promotional refs (press releases, invivo website) with newspaper, wine business & magazine articles. There could be more about its awards and achievements, but an exhaustive list of every award and trophy won at every competition is unencyclopædic, but also not very informative anyway since often wineries only enter competitions they expect to win, or where there is little competition, or where the bigger players you'd expect to win don't enter, which is the only reason NZ Pinot Noir wins international competitions since none of the interesting French châteaux ever enter. (see also Villa Maria Estates) — Jon (talk) 02:36, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
article has heavy bias
editthis page reads like marketing twaddle. this is not a quality article 188.220.173.65 (talk) 18:25, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
- You should have seen it before I had a go at cleaning it up :-) feel free to contribute improvements, that is after all the point of Wikipedia.—Jon (talk) 19:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)