Talk:Isaac Komnenos (brother of Alexios I)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Cplakidas in topic Prose Suggestions

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Isaac Komnenos (brother of Alexios I)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:53, 6 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 01:53, 6 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for taking the time, Iazyges. Take as much time as you need. Cheers, Constantine 10:34, 6 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y (Highest is 3.8%, only due to name of citation being in said citation)
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No Dead links  Y
  • Images appropriately licensed  Y

Prose Suggestions

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Hi Iazyges, thanks for taking the time to review, I'll start working on it later today. Cheers, Constantine 12:01, 19 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
Finished going through your suggestions. Apart from the prose issues, and beyond GAR requirements, do you have any suggestions for further improvement? Any areas that are not easy to understand and might need more background material or details? Cheers, Constantine 20:37, 19 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
The only room for improvement I can see is you may wish to give the name of the Chronicle in the "who according to one anonymous chronicle" part, if it is known. Passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:26, 19 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
I'll see what i can find. Thanks again for your time and suggestions. Constantine 23:47, 19 January 2018 (UTC)Reply